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Sentiment VS. Freestylefilosofi [10 bars, engelska]

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2007-03-04 16:21

Sentiment VS. Freestylefilosofi [10 bars, engelska]

Sentiment:

Started writin' last week? It is obvious you geek
you're tensed holdin' your pen, closing eyes, then "Amen"
Look at your panties - they are wet, not a passing scary threat
your rap is smellin' dirt, it's worse than I've ever heard, now
Bend down and bow to your master anyhow
you'can't even boast ya spelling, and you SUCK on storytelling
specially 'bout your silly life - so you'll never get a wife (sorry)
Having shivering enough? Know my rap is pretty rough -
i'll let you finish your pee, wow THAT one is scaring me!
So you keep your mouth shut, or I'll massacre your butt!

Freestylefilosofi:

chill down, bitch, or i'll just bust a cap into your head,
that shit you do ain't rhymin', it's makin' sure hiphop's dead.
massacre my butt? you're more scaring then i'd expect,
comin' from a broad who's not even able to spell correct.
freestylephilosophy, i kick your head in,
you're bright enough to understand where this is headin.
fuck wives, my rhymes are shreddin'.
you better know this is a battle - and not a weddin'.
trying to win? don't even bother,
i'll break ya' down just as i did with your mother.

. . .

Först till fem som vanligt.

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2007-03-04 18:01
Vote; Freestylefilosofi

skönare text, gillar:

"fuck wives, my rhymes are shreddin'.
you better know this is a battle - and not a weddin'.
"

hade bra svar tillbaka faktist.

keep it up, peace
"It ain't about how hard you hit, it's about how hard you can get hit and keep movin forward! How much you can take, and keep movin forward!"

2007-03-05 00:19
upp, upp, upp.
votes vore nice.

peace!


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2007-03-06 17:10
upp
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2007-03-06 17:13
Vote; freestylefilosofi

solklart
Yooooo, Danzeeeeeel!
Västerort foh Life!

2007-03-06 17:14
Vote; freestylefiosofi
 

2007-03-06 17:16
3-1 då, keep voting!
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2007-03-08 23:13
upp! fler votes tack.
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2007-03-09 02:42
vote freestylefilosofi (man ditt namn är jobbigt att skriva)

Mer sammanhängande och bättre flow i texten, bra försvar också.
Sentiment såg bra ut också men vissa saker såg lite ut som nödrim och det hela kändes mer krystat. Skönt att se lite engelska i alla fall keep it up!

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2007-03-09 18:51
okej. alla röster inne.

gissar på att det var lite ironi från juniorhadebussh, haha ;)
men tack för alla votes iaf!
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2007-03-10 00:52
EnemyOfMankind P21

Vart ser du hans sjukt grymma rim...


Head-Dead, Expect-Correct, Head in-Headin-Shreddin-Weddin, Bother-Mother..

Inga grymma rim i mina ögon... men men smaken e som baken
 

2007-03-10 17:08
Okej.. tänkte väl, för att dom rimmen som han drog var inte grymma nånstans..