100% lyrical veteran...

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blizzak 2005-06-16 01:01	100% lyrical veteran... Yea, I tried to get the big picture, instead I just clicked I’ll be dead before dawn without them Medics in flic’s All embedded in risks yet I better get beheaded by dicks Than flat rated of one of y’all critiquing ass chick’s I’ll be Seeing this mist as the fog of war in all causes A poor bastard soaring without a cause, laying the laws If y’all read n don’t respond is not my problem at all I’m fading but don’t bother to call y’all don’t bother at all Falling towards a botomless pit with murderous spit Y’all heard me I’m sick, probably the best of them all But the crest is my fall, testing my breathless appall The harder I land the smarter my plan will succeed Demanding a planned event of success for my drop Proceeding to give my fans that essence of hiphop My precense is mocked, looked down n frowned upon Still I am the dopest writer around crowned with flaws Underground without a cause, pausing for nothing Kept y’all waiting two years, you’ll applause what I’m dropping Safe with my sound n’ backed by some of the illest Had Porter, Swing n soul and Aegiz summoned to kill this No akilles complex, killing kids with a complex structure Done flexed my syllable muscles willing to take it further Verse after verse with word murdering y’all never heard of But the burden of my seeds is certain to get blurted So reveal me from the curtains, slurring a sick verb gift With the destination to your ears that this is fucken perfect Something rotten, dirty it’s outta Gothenburg y’all heard me The forgotten son of the meadows uncrowned in the ghettos Letting off rounds of supreme sound pictures n scriptures I’m here, ripping it sick n just unpredictably wicked Blizz the syllable scheme specialist a clean veteran Settling the standards for rhymes n mean lyrical peddling A pure gold medal in bold lettering directed at me A neglected emcee predicting the future at hands News to advance, you’ll hear my name as the blessed Enhanced from simply the ill to be claimed as the best Heads up...blizz the divine lycrically raping heads still So if you dare to take a shot, end up like the rest...Dead, killed... So take a shot, give me critique n vision what happens My weapon off mass destruction is still how I’m rapping No matter how ignorant you stay I will still step n advance Blizz is the divine no matter what, still blessing the stands You can keep your bragging rights n your friends dapz Your minimal fanbase still can’t match my immense raps Blizz is the biggest, figure that out from these words This belittlement will be doubted but over the seas heard got the world on my shoulders, so succumb by the greatest I can be the dopes you’ve heard or stay dumb like the haters "I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones." ---Albert Einstein
AntLon P36 2005-06-16 11:18	Du e riktigt grym blizz.
spex 2005-06-16 12:33	My precense is mocked, looked down n frowned upon Still I am the dopest writer around crowned with flaws Underground without a cause, pausing for nothing Kept y’all waiting two years, you’ll applause what I’m dropping Safe with my sound n’ backed by some of the illest Had Porter, Swing n soul and Aegiz summoned to kill this No akilles complex, killing kids with a complex structure Done flexed my syllable muscles willing to take it further A pure gold medal in bold lettering directed at me A neglected emcee predicting the future at hands News to advance, you’ll hear my name as the blessed Enhanced from simply the ill to be claimed as the best Heads up...blizz the divine lycrically raping heads still So if you dare to take a shot, end up like the rest...Dead, killed... No matter how ignorant you stay I will still step n advance Blizz is the divine no matter what, still blessing the stands You can keep your bragging rights n your friends dapz Your minimal fanbase still can’t match my immense raps got the world on my shoulders, so succumb by the greatest I can be the dopes you’ve heard or stay dumb like the haters helt klart de bästa raderna. första "versen" kändes lite trög och jag gillade inte rimschemat i mitten. andra vart du blizzak och samma med tredje. allt som allt; above heads norman bates behemot bubba fett alfred bello arthur's detour azazello
blizzak 2005-06-16 18:19	eyy cool spex...fösta är lite seg, det håller jag med om... paztaz0r: de stavfelen som finns e obefintliga.... "I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>
GAIA 2005-08-16 01:13	Yes, bra rader som är enkla att flyta till ett beat. Du skriver ofta rader där föregående bars har samma antal stavelser. Det gör det också lätt att se att du rappar (en sanning med en viss portion salt då vissa rappar som typ twista också, ;) Finns egentligen inget jag har att säga (som inte redan sagts om tusentals texter du skrivit förr känns det som). Finns dock två viktiga faktorer, en på gott och ont. Det finns en viss stil över dina texter, formatmässigt men även innehållsmässigt. Tyvärr får man inte se andra varianter då du sällan varierar ditt skrivande. Det andra är ditt exceptionellt oftast trevliga rimschema. Underground without a cause, pausing for nothing Kept y’all waiting two years, you’ll applause what I’m dropping Safe with my sound n’ backed by some of the illest Had Porter, Swing n soul and Aegiz summoned to kill this No akilles complex, killing kids with a complex structure Done flexed my syllable muscles willing to take it further Verse after verse with word murd ering y’all never heard of But the burden of my seeds is certain to get blurted So reveal me from the curtains, slurring a sick verb gift With the destination to your ears that this is fucken perfect Something rotten, dirty it’s outta Gothenburg y’all heard me The forgotten son of the meadows uncrowned in the ghettos Letting off rounds of supreme sound pictures n scriptures I’m here, ripping it sick n just unpredictably wicked Blizz the syllable scheme specialist a clean veteran Settling the standards for rhymes n mean lyrical peddling Syftar då främst på mittenpartiet. Flame (admin) skriver nästan identiskt med det rimschemat. Du gör det dock ofta i alla dina texter. Många har sin stil, finns en på whoa som kallar sig Kammel/vadvadvad och kör oftast RIM************************evRIM2 evRIM2************************RIM Nuff said, det var nice, skulle gärna höra det. //Peace

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