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När -Trikkantolala- pratar engelska {[LOOVE]}

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2005-07-30 15:00

När -Trikkantolala- pratar engelska {[LOOVE]}

He´s alive, but you see the fading soul in his eyes
Whether he´ll survive is just a roll off the dice
She left a hole in his life, walking out that door
Without her caring he began falling down that morn
Tremendous preasure, she was a delicious treasure,
but became a victim of his malicious pleasure
The regrets he gets is not of this world
Whants to take back a lot of his words
But the words were said and the hurt were done
Gone are the days when he were the one
He´s not healing, staring apathetic at the ceiling
He´s grieving, needing a pathetic little feeling
A pathetic little feeling he once felt called joy
But now he ´s all coy feeling like a small boy
Stone cold, he´s now wrapped in his cocoon
Banning sunlight, craving for the blue moon

 

2005-07-30 15:44
Lookin good, men använd för fan apostrofer istället för accenter. ;)
"Jasså?Därför som White Lions fått så mycket skit av media?Sveriges farligaste klack,hell yeah" - Zow P16

2005-07-30 18:56
Thanks vikke my only fan a day like this :)
 
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2005-07-31 14:20
Den var bra faktiskt.. Gillade rimmen, men jag får den inte att flowa speciellt. Det känns som om det blir lite många "he" i slutet faktiskt.. Det går att ta bort nåt eller några utan att det skadar texten så mycket.
Bra som helhet.. Droppa mer engelska!