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random lines from a random rhymebook..

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2004-11-04 01:49

random lines from a random rhymebook..

(Idé från: Nas - Book of Rhymes)

Ima hit ya up with some random lines from my rhymebook..
..
.. Oh.. Here... I wrote this.. During reclaim.. yea..
...
Reclaiming or desecrating the streets, whatever../
It's eternal, the battle between the sides.. forever/
Clash of the swords, rath of the poor.. It's all progress/
Some choose to fight it others don't even bother/
Same result, sit quiet or have a good beat like J-Zone/
Good, evil, right, left, black, white.. it is a grayzone/
.. True that..
.. Let's see what we got here..
... Oh, some idealism.. hey..
..
You spend your life by the sideline cheering for the turtle/
But unless you trip the rabbit, you stand without a purpose/
Fuck styles, nations, I'm not a product of environment/
Never blend in, in this rhyming game with diamond and chains/
That's me! The only emcee who shakes the earth without a mic/
I saw where the improvment was needed, I was bound to write/
..
.... Yeah.. Gotcha there.. Here I am, on the mic, alright..
Oh shit, these lines are old..
...
I was filled up with rain with only one way to vent/
Listen friend, I've said it before and I'll say it again/
Money talks, yes but currency is just a ventriloquist/
You let the third world pay with their right to exist/
As my sympathy was stolen, my affection was given/
Don't give in, just sing along with me for the world we live in/
.. Ha.. Man I was tight even then...
.. Well that's me.. I want yall to realize, there is a difference between contradiction and just seeing things from two different perspectives...
Aight, let me hit you up with something a bit more flowish..
Hmm.. Ah, there ya go...
I grab and shacke battle rappers/
Strapped as I kamikaze their adam's apples/
I rewrite the chapter right, sending rappers to afterlives/
Smashing sandbags, bashing faghags/
Blast the gas tanks to contrast the anthrax/
Retire players! Im on higher levels/
I raise the stakes like Vampire Slayers/
Splitting atoms, turning anatomies to fragments/
Motherfucker, or the end of your parents' marriage/
The best on this site, leaving admins impressed/
These hardcore rappers are damsels in distress/
Im here to stay; I wont be-leaving like an atheist/
And you want the irony.. I really have faith in this/
Fuck Talent, my soul's blessed!/
I burn parkbenches to make your whole crew homeless.../
... hooo.. let's sum this up..
When I write its like Im calling the Devil back/
When I rhyme its like a stalling lever snaps/
When I spit it its like I pin-point Forever on tracks/ ... Yes.. That's all for now..

Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains
Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose
http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-04 13:13
I will :) will do
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-04 13:38
har vi inte sett minst 50% innan? snyggt iaf
norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello
Rappare

2004-11-04 15:04



"Im here to stay; I wont be-leaving like an atheist/
And you want the irony.. I really have faith in this/
Fuck Talent, my soul's blessed!/
I burn parkbenches to make your whole crew homeless.../"

houha!

Det här var skön läsning.. Alla texter var bra, men jag gillade de två sista bäst. Skulle vilja se mer av den tredje faktiskt.

Aja, fett iaf.
peace

2004-11-04 23:24
Tackar :) alla..

spex, nåra rader kanske..
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-06 16:05
Booooooyaaa....

Damn... spela in på en gång, det här vill jag skaka skallen till.
Props!
http://www.kortfilmsfestival.se

2004-11-06 16:40
du är en av de få som faktist får sånt här att hållas ihop riktigt tight. jättebra.

första var kanske lite trevande, men sen när du kom igång så va de inget som kunde stoppa dig. även om man kanske sett nån rad tidigare var det bara en som jag direkt kunde peka ut: I raise the stakes like Vampire Slayers/ , resten hade du maskerat bra.

gillar raderna med kursivt mycket, likaså avslutningen.




how do you like it, how do you like it? MORE MORE MORE !
:)
Close your eyes, Just feel and realize, it is real and not a dream, I'm in you and you're in me.
Producent

2004-11-07 13:01
tiggedy!

kul sätt att skriva på :)
Nine.D
Multifaceted Creativity
http://www.INFININETY.se

2004-11-07 16:09
DinKritiker F17 Jo, du har rätt. Den har jag använt förr :) Tack för den utförliga kritiken!

You'll get more and more and mooooore! ;D
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-07 23:05
Omen22 också för den delen!
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-09 22:31
I was filled up with rain with only one way to vent/
Listen friend, I've said it before and I'll say it again/
Money talks, yes but currency is just a ventriloquist/
You let the third world pay with their right to exist/
As my sympathy was stolen, my affection was given/
Don't give in, just sing along with me for the world we live in/

..var bäst och battle shit:et på slutet. nice as usual.
Denna användare har skrivit alla inlägg där användaren har tagits bort från whoa.

2004-11-09 23:02
den var riktigt tung!
underhållande läsning på ett flertl sätt...

keep it upp!
I'm Superman! King fucking Kong! I can pick you up and throw you a million miles. I'm number one. Number fucking one. I'm number one. Number fucking one. Number one! Number one! Number one!

2004-11-10 12:46
Olika typer av texter som skulle fungera bra som en rappad självanalytisk feedback, dvs liknande typ grejerna som bl.a. demigodz gjort, schysst med kommentarer i pauserna. Rimmen var aight och en och annan kul rad som "raising the stakes" poppade med jämna mellanrum upp. Nä, detta var jämnt och bra läsning, skulle fungera utmärkt till ett beat som t.ex. If you only knew med Jurassic 5.

/Upp

2004-11-11 01:43
ThePharaoh P17 Tackar :D

GAIA P22 Kul med beatförslag till texter, borde man få oftare. om du har beatet skicka över.
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-11 04:24
HwArAnG P18

intressant text, känns genomtänkt.. lite idé bakom, inget "äh fan jag skriver av mig"..
Lugn!

2004-11-11 10:48
såg bra ut. se till att låta naturlig och avslappnad i mellansnacket bara, annars kan sånt förstöra en låt...
Denna användare har skrivit alla inlägg där användaren har tagits bort från whoa.

2004-11-11 13:34
HW

Det kan jag minsann göra, uppar denna text lite också, :)

2004-11-11 20:27
vicolino P18 Aight, ska tänka på det

GAIA P22 Aight cool ;D
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2005-02-11 08:50
DnH har rätt för en gångs skull! Sov inte på denna!
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2005-03-01 14:42
Denna uppar jag becouse:

På nåt skumt men ändå härligt sätt så för den mig tillbaka till sommaren i city 1996 och Mtv Raps.
Kanske låter lite konstigt men jag tycker den känns ol' school.
Heavy shit måste jag säga!

Samtidigt får jag också bilden av att du skriver denna sent på kvällen typ, under en 40 watts lampa i det mörka rummet o slänger kladdar efter kladdar.
Men denna blev fulländad i sin helhet.

Det enda "dåliga" jag kan säga om den är att den skulle (enligt mig) bli grymmare på audio, för såna här texter lyssnar man hellre på än läser.

Peace.. bonde;)
I'm Superman! King fucking Kong! I can pick you up and throw you a million miles. I'm number one. Number fucking one. I'm number one. Number fucking one. Number one! Number one! Number one!

2005-03-01 14:51
"Never blend in, in this rhyming game with diamond and chains/
That's me! The only emcee who shakes the earth without a mic/
I saw where the improvment was needed, I was bound to write/" - Heavy shizzle fo jizzle!


"As my sympathy was stolen, my affection was given/
Don't give in, just sing along with me for the world we live in/"
- Like a glove!



Im a b-boy in a b-boy stands who like to find a b-girl who wants to breakdance...

Take it back to tha days!
I'm Superman! King fucking Kong! I can pick you up and throw you a million miles. I'm number one. Number fucking one. I'm number one. Number fucking one. Number one! Number one! Number one!