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Hw&Ph - Carnival, Myth, Harvest, Carnage.

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2004-11-12 02:32

Hw&Ph - Carnival, Myth, Harvest, Carnage.

Phoenix - The Carnival.
Boy, you better stick to writing/
Cause while I'm spitting cyphers you're licking diapers/
We're out of your league, stepping out of alignement/
Only to be up in your faces quite like advertisement/
We're incognito, dressed in trenchcoats with skateboards/
And we'll get you so perplexed you'll start eating play'dough/
We're bombing your town, rushing your crib like Stormtroopers/
While cats on Whoa are fucking failures like pornbloopers/

Hwarang - The Myth
Boy, you bite my lines, but I fight the crimes/
I write my rhymes and just enlight your minds/
Burning blocks in projects where's Pac's a prophet/
I rock your concert and cock your tonsils as I fuck your nostrils/
The streets are humming , the concrete's in rumble/
The beat is drumming, enemies know defeat is coming/
Phoenix fought with humor and analogues and rumors/
I'm too ill for that, I'm a tumor loved by consumers/
Styles spread like aids around pride and rainbow plaques/
Taking a stand, just take a seat and ride the railroad tracks/
You don't deserve your rocks, I've earned my spot/
And you jealous little haters can all slurb my cock../

Phoenix - The Harvest
You'll be insane by agony, by the pain inside of thee/
Until this day of tragedy gets switched for casualty/
Words restrained by blasphemy sustains our masterpiece/
As chicks get flunked and start to blame the faculty/
I'm reversing brackets, collecting people unexpectedly easy/
Lyrically bursting caskets with a mind neglected and feeble/
Ya'll rehears your battles and get a electrical feeling/
And I emerge from my ashes only to resurrect like a Phoenix/
You hate me? Feelings are mutual and I leave you as usual/
While I'm pleading for a future that is evil but crucial/
Fags get struck by anxiety, that's why I'm busting reality/
And like rebellions in Gothenburg we're rocking society/

Hwarang - The Carnage
I'm so oldschool I rocked the crowd at stone hedge/
Stone age, I'm so newschool I represent a homepage/
Hwarang and Phoenix, on top of mountains of corpses /
The kings of the Hill, covered by their fountain of losses/
When all of our adrenaline drips we rattle skeleton chips/
Sweaters get ripped, honestly who are better than this?/
Fiving me wordplays?I asked for was some fucking variety/
History repeats itself, and once again we're rocking society/

Som ni ser hade vi inte bestämt stil under första.
Men det fick lösas med lite stilmixar..
+Phoenix = Spex

Edit:
Om du bara skriver "Bra", "Dåligt" så behöver du inte skriva alls.
Ge konstruktiv kritik, ta ut det bästa/sämsta.
Tack på förhand. Mvh/ Hwarang och Phoenix

Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains
Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose
http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-12 02:35
Mad nice! Jag gillar skarpt, schysst rim båda två och håller det på en avancerad nivå som jag gillar :)
We came from a distant land, our lives allready planned. We came in ships from across the sea, never again home we would see. And now we become american fruit, with african roots.

2004-11-12 18:02
Sparvass P17 Tack, favoritrader?
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-12 18:20
Words restrained by blasphemy sustains our masterpiece/
As chicks get flunked and start to blame the faculty/

Burning blocks in projects where's Pac's a prophet/
I rock your concert and cock your tonsils as I fuck your nostrils/

Fiving me wordplays?I asked for was some fucking variety/
History repeats itself, and once again we're rocking society/

Boy, you bite my lines, but I fight the crimes/
I write my rhymes and just enlight your minds/

We're incognito, dressed in trenchcoats with skateboards/
And we'll get you so perplexed you'll start eating play'dough/

Läste och tog ut direkt, detta såg jag mest =)
We came from a distant land, our lives allready planned. We came in ships from across the sea, never again home we would see. And now we become american fruit, with african roots.

2004-11-13 03:32
Sparvass P17 Tackar, ser du! Det var inte så svårt va! :D
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-13 03:39
HwArAnG: Nejdå, det var väldigt enkelt! :D

Offtopic: Nu måste jag kila ner i bädden, trött som fan och ska sända liiiveee radio imorgon!
We came from a distant land, our lives allready planned. We came in ships from across the sea, never again home we would see. And now we become american fruit, with african roots.

2004-11-13 14:22
Your street team, bunch of weaklings
Don't ever let me catch your reachin'
Respect when a grown man is speakin'
Shh, keep on sleepin', and just like TLC, I keep on "creepin"

om man ska citera mr meth
norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello

2004-11-13 15:14
I'm so oldschool I rocked the crowd at stone hedge/
Stone age, I'm so newschool I represent a homepage/

Fags get struck by anxiety, that's why I'm busting reality/
And like rebellions in Gothenburg we're rocking society


kiff, fooooooow shåw!
dingrinn.blogspot.com

2004-11-13 15:40
nice att se spex, whoa jag menar Phoenix på Lyrisiscm.

While cats on Whoa are fucking failures like pornbloopers/

var nice
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2004-11-13 17:23
Aforism gött att du gilla iaf
trimmad kiff like ya moma
ThePharaoh fo' sho', there's more coming up, bra att du också gillade
norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello

2004-11-15 00:08
ThePharaoh P17 : Ya knaw it true true.
Aforism Aight, jag väntar!
trimmad Tack så mycket, respekt.
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-15 19:21
ni båda behärskar engelskan som ingen annan här inne, och med tanke på det ska ni också vara extra noggrana med ert språk. när ni använder fina ord och invecklade meningsbyggnader är det lätt att man tröttnar och tappar tråden. härmed inte sagt att man gör det i den här texten, men den är lite på gränsen till att vara för "fin" i språket. lätt och lagom.

Cause while I'm spitting cyphers you're licking diapers
- ett ord: JÄKK!

Only to be up in your faces quite like advertisement
- så sant så.

Boy, you bite my lines, but I fight the crimes
- m.a.o. såna som inte ger konstruktiv kritik?

I rock your concert and cock your tonsils as I fuck your nostrils
- de sku int jag vilja va med om.

You don't deserve your rocks, I've earned my spot
And you jealous little haters can all slurb my cock..
- snyggt avslut

While I'm pleading for a future that is evil but crucial
- igen, så sant så.

I'm so oldschool I rocked the crowd at stone hedge
Stone age, I'm so newschool I represent a homepage
- snyggt uppbyggd, snygg ordlek.

I asked for was some fucking variety
- har ett "all" fallit bort eller är jag korkad?

de märktes i början att ni inte bestämt stil, men de visste ni ju redan så. gillar dock uppdelningen med underrubrikerna, likaså dom fetstilta orden.

history can repeat itself anytime.





Close your eyes, Just feel and realize, it is real and not a dream, I'm in you and you're in me.

2004-11-17 13:24
Tack Saara, så ska kritik se ut! Alla andra, lär er! :D

Tack aforism, jooo, det är jäkligt flowable
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-21 23:47
Ain't that a muddafukka!
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-22 00:20
Ärligt så ifall jag kollar på engelska texter så gillar jag punchlines o relativ lätt engelska.

Så denna föll mig inte i smaken riktigt.

Dock fanns det några guldkorn.

I'm so oldschool I rocked the crowd at stone hedge/
Stone age, I'm so newschool I represent a homepage/
-skön..

You don't deserve your rocks, I've earned my spot/
And you jealous little haters can all slurb my cock../
-Gillar rader om kuksufning:) haha

We're bombing your town, rushing your crib like Stormtroopers/
While cats on Whoa are fucking failures like pornbloopers/
- haha nice

Sammanfattning:

Jag gillade de hårda/roliga raderna..

Känns som att ni har blandat både "skryt/bullshit" med seriös text.

Och jag gillar då enbart det hårda/roliga med den..

Tre tummar upp

(Y)(Y)(Y)

2004-11-22 20:52
Danko, men försök skapa ett bredare seende för sånt här. Större delen av bra engelsk hiphop är helt komik/punchie-löst ;D
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-22 20:57
det var bra !
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2004-11-23 00:24
rapmaster_kekke P0
Tack, dock var din kritik bottenusel :)
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-23 01:52
tungt.. allt jag kan säga :)
"Don´t try to bend the spoon, that´s impossible. <br> Instead, only try to realise the truth... <br> What Truth? There is no spoon..."

2004-11-23 21:15
Ö P18 That's the spexshine.

RandomEvent P17 Tack, men sugig kritik dawg.
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-23 21:17
haha Hwarang hittade inte ord för tillfället, men kan ta de nu då,
detta gäller båda, era rader flöt på bra,hitta flowet i dom,
och coolt innehåll fan ;) och ganska många fina rim !.

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2004-11-24 22:54
rapmaster_kekke P0 Okelleydokelly

Ö P18 Bettah recognize mugwukka!
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-11-28 12:35
buckah buck!
norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello

2004-11-28 15:06
Damn its nice :)

And like rebellions in Gothenburg we're rocking society

While cats on Whoa are fucking failures like pornbloopers/
 

2005-01-12 21:01
Tack så mycket Trikka!
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2005-03-10 22:58
Tack!

Varför inte en upp?
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101