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Phoenix - His sofa, a balancing knife

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2004-12-18 20:18

Phoenix - His sofa, a balancing knife

Contrasts on a paper from the mind of a prodigy
An outcast, fulfilling self-inflicted prophecies
With a life he'll concentrate on when this is over
But from now on he's alone, contemplating on his sofa

His sofa - standing alone
Standing strong, the place that his life got stranded on
It was handed on to him, from generation to generation
From father to son, a sofa decorated with decorations
It came in a package, it was wrecked and shackled
And not like it matters but it came partially damaged
Beautiful arm rests, carved combining soul with matter
And sculptured flowers looking like growing patterns
His life, the sofa, giving pleasureful riches
He built it up, trusted it, grew simultaneously with it
The sofa settled in his mind, grew stronger every day
He slept his day's away cause he couldn't stay awake
A future not meant for him, crossing his path, it was
Nothing in fact, so he asked if there was something he lacked
and God responded back with an ironical laugh...

Waking up, he realised reality, received consciousness
It was the cause of his troubles, it was common sense
His sofa - the reason why he troubled commonwealth
His family showed condolence, but they lacked with compliments
and his confidence slacked...

Pitch black, a sofa, once filled with pals
So he shooked his eyes... and the sofa took his life
The crooked lies, a never-ending continuing fight
A bottomless pit... a blown out inner light
Some contrasts on a paper from the mind this prodigy
An outcast, fulfilling self-inflicted prophecies
With a life he'll concentrate on when this is over
But from now on he's alone, contemplating on his sofa

his eyelids are heavy, his hands are heavy
his life is empty as he falls asleep for the last time...

norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello

2004-12-18 21:02
ska nämna att texten är skrivet efter detta beat men kommer inte komma som audio..
norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello

2004-12-18 22:24
jag gillar den, tycker t.o.m. att den är en av de bättre du presterat. du har bra djup på den, använder svåra ord men i lagom mängd, och, det bästa; du lämnar utrymme för var och en som läser att på sitt eget vis tolka den här texten, soffan kan symbolisera helt olika saker för olika personer.

jag vill ha audio.
Close your eyes, Just feel and realize, it is real and not a dream, I'm in you and you're in me.

2004-12-19 02:28
DnH trevligt att du gillar.. audio kommer väl nån gång, inte på den här bara.
Sara Mannsén bra att du gillar du också, och soffan är väl lite för alla att tycka som de vill om, ja. du får audio nån gång, kanske.. vem vet inte du vem vet inte jag vi vet ingenting nu vi vet inget idag
norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello

2004-12-19 14:32
Jag tycker om texter med annorlunda ämnen och det var bra engelska.. Jag skulle gärna höra en audio...=)
Denna användare har skrivit alla inlägg där användaren har tagits bort från whoa.

2004-12-19 19:44
PillarSaint en annan gång.. tack
norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello

2004-12-20 17:39
keep on sleepin'
norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello

2004-12-21 01:12
Eyelids! Whutta surprise!

It came in a package, it was wrecked and shackled
And not like it matters but it came partially damaged
-Tight.

I helhet så var det aight. Du vet att jag bedömmer dig en bit över whoas huvuden, så ta det inte hår. Men det var för abstrakt och distanserat. Du borde måla upp känsla mer som raderna över, som var i skön atmospherestil.


Du får ett allmänt betyg av B+ .
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-12-21 20:02
tack, i guess.. upp
norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello

2004-12-21 20:29
It came in a package, it was wrecked and patched up
And not like it matters but it came partially damaged

skulle jag nog ändra till btw, eller liknande. Shackled låter för krystat.

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Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2004-12-22 23:03
upp
norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello

2004-12-26 14:10
upp før sista gången... tænk att ja sløsar værdefull tid i norge på att uppa mina gamla texter
norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello