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Komik- The biography of The chosen one...

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2005-01-12 22:09

Komik- The biography of The chosen one...

The biography of The chosen one...

My lines and your girl has much in common in late nights-
No matter how much you fuck with them, they allways stay tight!
You say you are droppin’ "The shit", well you are, so please stop!
I am the reason to the "Missionary", couse I am allways on top!

This is the story about The chosen one, the most sublime infinity-
One day he came to the holy land, to propogate his so fine divinity-
An hour after he left, a messenger came and said it was urgent-
The following line was said: Virgin Mary is no longer a Virgin!

Blao! Like a blind pornstar, you didn’t see it coming!
Your reactions on me reminds me of extacy, you’ll be up and running!
You carreer is over now! Don’t even consider giving yourself a drastic restart-
Cuz the only ones puttin their hands up at your show, is a bunch of spasmic retards!

Don’t ever fuckin test me! I am your faith so don’t push me!
I am so raw, my nickname in Japan is Sushi!
One final line, your life depends on how I close this one-
I think that I have proven by now that I am the chosen one…

I'm Superman! King fucking Kong! I can pick you up and throw you a million miles. I'm number one. Number fucking one. I'm number one. Number fucking one. Number one! Number one! Number one!

2005-01-12 22:27
My lines and your girl has much in common in late nights-
No matter how much you fuck with them, they allways stay tight!
-whoa, whoa whoa. rejält tight.

This is the story about The chosen one, the most sublime infinity-
One day he came to the holy land, to propogate his so fine divinity-
-Ta bort so fine här, pajar flowet och låter messed up.

You say you are droppin’ "The shit", well you are, so please stop!
-Ta bort so, så flyter den bättre.

Blao! Like a blind pornstar, you didn’t see it coming!
-Played like a muthafucka

An hour after he left, a messenger came and said it was urgent-
The following line was said: Virgin Mary is no longer a Virgin!
-Kul kul =)

Jodå, shit was aight. Om hela texten hade hållt samma kvalitét som de första raderna hade denna text varit en solklar A.
Men tappade lite allt eftersom och vissa rader var lite hmm..

B.
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2005-01-12 23:46
rätt skön.. dom lines som Hwa propsade var tighta. Slutet var också tight.

fast jag har kört en:

mc's get chopped up eaten raw like sushi
cuz youre smalltime like a lifeguard at a jacuzzi
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2005-01-13 05:49
My lines and your girl has much in common in late nights-
No matter how much you fuck with them, they allways stay tight!
You say you are droppin’ "The shit", well you are, so please stop!
I am the reason to the "Missionary", couse I am allways on top!
hur jävla tight som helst. speciellt första 2 raderna som Hwa propsa..

smarta och roliga lines även i denna text. keep it up man!

minst ett B+ :)
vågar du köra på mig igen då fitta?

2005-01-13 11:44
Hw :
tack så mkt!
Alltid kul med folk som vet hur man droppar bra o konstruktiv kritik!

ThePharaoh:
Tackar´tackar!
Sushi radern är nog ganska playead;P

why:
Tackar! Kul att du tycker om my shit!


Upp!
I'm Superman! King fucking Kong! I can pick you up and throw you a million miles. I'm number one. Number fucking one. I'm number one. Number fucking one. Number one! Number one! Number one!

2005-01-13 12:53
My lines and your girl has much in common in late nights-
No matter how much you fuck with them, they allways stay tight!
-whoa, whoa whoa. rejält tight.

This is the story about The chosen one, the most sublime infinity-
One day he came to the holy land, to propogate his so fine divinity-
-Ta bort so fine här, pajar flowet och låter messed up.

You say you are droppin’ "The shit", well you are, so please stop!
-Ta bort so, så flyter den bättre.

Blao! Like a blind pornstar, you didn’t see it coming!
-Played like a muthafucka

An hour after he left, a messenger came and said it was urgent-
The following line was said: Virgin Mary is no longer a Virgin!
-Kul kul =)

Jodå, shit was aight. Om hela texten hade hållt samma kvalitét som de första raderna hade denna text varit en solklar A.
Men tappade lite allt eftersom och vissa rader var lite hm
damn, what's wrong with my generation?
we was the cream of the crop but it seems we've been robbed
that's what happens when you trade in all your dreams for a job

2005-01-13 14:57
Tack Queff......

Även om du kanske tycker likadant kan du iaf försöka att omformulera dig...
I'm Superman! King fucking Kong! I can pick you up and throw you a million miles. I'm number one. Number fucking one. I'm number one. Number fucking one. Number one! Number one! Number one!

2005-01-13 15:02
du har blivit mkt bättre sen ja läste nått från dig sist. texten hade väl sina ner och uppgångar, men allt som allt va d tight. fortsätt så!
norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello

2005-01-13 15:19
Tack spex!

Konstruktiv kritik önskas mer än gärna!
pZ
I'm Superman! King fucking Kong! I can pick you up and throw you a million miles. I'm number one. Number fucking one. I'm number one. Number fucking one. Number one! Number one! Number one!

2005-01-13 20:58
My lines and your girl has much in common in late nights-
No matter how much you fuck with them, they allways stay tight!

haha..behöver inte ens säga varför den e bra! =) nice man, mera sånt!

virgin mary grejjern va oxå nice!!

blev dock lite för långa rader i mitten...gjorde att flowt försvann
...men men, nice som fan o br aavslutning oxå!

kepp it fresh! :D

Drick Mjölk! *Muuuuuuuu*!!!