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From a Bookworm to Butterfly indeed finshed shit

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2005-01-16 16:37

From a Bookworm to Butterfly indeed finshed shit

Såhär kan det låta<-----



every time when spring comes and the first roses flower
the boy recalls the face and that single hour
when she smiled in his direction whispered and said
this prison is hell, pray for me while I put my wish in the well



She took the last piece of the crumb ate it and wept
she'd made it to death and her last quest saved her the rest
a depraved teen, eighteen with an urge to be seen
class mates serving her mean remarks in this scene
alone in the classroom, blocking the stares with the desk
cornered by pupils not baring the prayers off her chest
finding words curing, a bookworm letting fantasy loose
releasing this leech of the surrounding cancerous abuse
refusing to loose, this malnourished bookworm will flower
crooked by power, she's finding strength from the prose
to later be putting pen to the paper quenching this rose
her petals is chubby, the glasses reflect beauty when seen
the next verse will put you in the most beautiful scene
where this dandelion will become the head of the pack
rising from the concrete not to be heading right back
learning to stand up for her self by beheading attacks
The thorns got clipped and the rose got watered down
soaked in comments about relief but it sorta frowned
she put the crumbs down, she refused to eat and sleep
read and weep, this flower hungers for social contact


hook

but she tried to take her life, despite the vanity in sight
it's insanity right, but this flower reached the fall
the season called her away from cloud nine into heaven
and the boy still remember that September eleventh
every time when spring comes and the first roses flower
the boy recalls the face and that single hour
when she smiled in his direction whispered and said
this prison is hell, pray for me while I put my wish in the well



the emotional come back came as a sudden impact
just when she wished her fathers rubbers wasn't intact
this lonely scrawny boy caught by her very shy vision
the first smile in three years breached her mind prison
she was a fine Christian, by the words from the book
this boy caught her eyes as a simple nerd by the look
observed by the crooks n bully's she made a move
sent a simple note that a bit later proved to improve
a week later a shy boy called her house over the phone
her father answered and the boy asked if she was home
she sat on her bed all alone reading her scribbled journal
she answered and it brought light to this little infernal
the date was a fact and this weak flower was blooming
but all the joy caused her low powers to be consuming
even though the sun seemed to shine in her direction
she still had demons in her head from all the past neglection
the lack of love n affection from role models throttled
even though he loved her dearly she downed a whole bottle
she blacked out, fell to the floor grasping for air
this frail girl was thought as the one lacking despair


hook

she tried to take her life, despite the vanity in sight
it's insanity right, but this flower reached the fall
the season called her away from cloud nine into heaven
and the boy still remember that September eleventh
when she smiled in his direction whispered and said
this prison is hell, pray for me while I put my wish in the well
every time when spring comes and the first roses flower
the boy recalls the face and that single hour
when she smiled in his direction whispered and said
this prison is hell, pray for me while I put my wish in the well



enjoyizzle!

"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."
---Albert Einstein

2005-01-16 18:19
Tung text..
Tung låt.

gillar din skrikiga röst
Fucks your life up crew
Tjabo!
Rappare

2005-01-16 23:04
oh, sanslöst fett..! Jag får rysningar!
Gör den nedladdningsbar!

2005-01-16 23:06
nah den ska mixas, mastras etc innan...

men tack!
"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-01-17 00:34
hur länge har du skrivit mayn?
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2005-01-17 01:17
Jag har skrivit sedan du va 11 och lekte med pokémon.
Asså ingen diss eller så men do the math... :)

thnxz for peepage...

"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-01-17 08:16
Det här är riktigt jävla bra. Verserna och hooken är uberfeta. Inget man kan plocka ut direkt eftersom det är en historia och allt passar in i sammanhanget. Säger som Omen: RySnInGaR.

Du vet att du är jävligt duktig och du är inte uppblåst över det eller har några mindervärdeskomplex som en del duktiga writers har trots deras talang. Vet ju egentligen inte jag, men det verkar så.
 

2005-01-17 08:21
o audion fan.

Kom ihåg att jag proppsade dig för låten du hade på streetzoneskivan för ett par år sen, tror det var den "Vi gräver djupare". Har inte orkat ladda nått med dig sedan dess, p.g.a. lathet och total ignorans av audioforumet, om du nu droppat där förstås. Nu hör jag ju att jag har missat en hel del och borde varit aktiv.

Aja, nu ska jag inte bli långdragen utan över till det seriösa rövslickeriet:

Grym röst, inlevelse, flyt. Detta är rap på nivåer som inte många når.

Pis n löv
 

2005-01-17 15:12
Riktigt skön text asså...

Hela texten bara flyter på så skönt.
Kan dock inte lyssna på låten För ja kan bara lyssna på saker som jag har laddat ner... Osv


Men riktigt nice,.. De e bara fortsätta skriva... lika roligt o läsa varje gång.

2005-01-17 16:42
älskade låten och texten, enda kritiken jag kan ge e att fortsätt utforska i ljud väg så kan det gå bra för dej, testa nya grejer, andra 'sorters' beats.

2005-01-19 23:42
testar en sista uppning...
"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-01-20 00:10
damn, den var go. gillade audion snorhårt.
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