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Queff & Komik - Bringin' it raw.txt

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2005-01-20 23:51

Queff & Komik - Bringin' it raw.txt

Queff (Bobby Q)
Watch me kickin' it off, why ya'll bitchin with bars?
when I throw uppercuts, the ones I punch will be visiting god
we're coming at ya, with some fo-fo's, some gat's n glocks
and you're retarded if you think you can write raps with us
you're getting slapped in the face, cuz you're a rapping disgrace
8mile came out 2002, but niggas haven't left the battlin' phaze
crews better recognize, test and die! nigga screw heaven
the cloosest ya'll came to a hood, were your new sweater
I'ma battle you cunts and after i'm done
ya'll be left with a face only a mother could love
I got one confession, since were stuck with ya'll
Here it goes; Bobby Q and Victorius, WE FUCKED YO MOMS!

-

Komik
Steps in like Ceasar, Hit the lights and I throw my dices right-
Couse I be rippin ears off using mic's like a Tyson fight!
Your girl is hot, now she gots those "embraced by me" breasts-
The only positive response you'll get, is from your HIV-test!
The rawest of whoa! You aint nuthin but a bunch of hypocrits-
You don't give a shit? I'll analfuck you, and you'll definently won't give a shit!
You recognize me now! Then I gotta ask you: test or run?-
Me and BBQ servin it raw, like a chineese fastfood resturant!
Fuck you all! I know the last line was played, but so is aristocrats-
Were sittin on an atlas in a copymachine, puttin our asses on the map!
No matter were we go, the clubs move locations, the owners our caddies-
Remember, Were the ones who made Virgin Mary turn Mary!









SLAP THAT ASS!

damn, what's wrong with my generation?
we was the cream of the crop but it seems we've been robbed
that's what happens when you trade in all your dreams for a job

2005-01-21 00:23
Queff: "we're coming at ya, with some fo-fo's, some gat's n glocks" - well, glocks & fo-fo's är gats så den raden blir ju inte så bra..
slutraden funkade bäst.. allt med hood är played :P
tråkig vers.

Komik: dice är dice i plural också (viktigpetter) så rimmen måste ändras i de 2 första förslagsvis :) annars reagerade jag positivt på 2 ställen:

"Your girl is hot, now she gots those "embraced by me" breasts-
The only positive response you'll get, is from your HIV-test!"
Visst andra raden är played som fan men rimmet innan är ju klockrent haha..

"Remember, Were the ones who made Virgin Mary turn Mary!"
Den var väl lite so, so egentligen men jag reagerade iaf :P

Rimkvalitet skiftade verkligen i denna versen.. men jag njöt av den mer än den föregående.. päjs
 

2005-01-21 00:25
coolt, men inget jag gillade speciellt mkt.

ya'll be left with a face only a mother could love
den va dock rolig :)

även.

Were sittin on an atlas in a copymachine, puttin our asses on the map!
oxå nice

You don't give a shit? I'll analfuck you, and you'll definently won't give a shit! "
bara jag som tyk d låter lite gay? =P


o en sak till komik...den här raden?
Remember, Were the ones who made Virgin Mary turn Mary!
inte redan lagt liknande? =)

men men....antar väl att d e soft att bara droppa lite shit from time 2 time...
Drick Mjölk! *Muuuuuuuu*!!!

2005-01-21 06:36
KamaSutra:
Tackar, mkt bra kritik!

Khom-Ey-Ni:
Haha, jag droppade den raden mitt i fuckin natten liksom..
Det är bara gay om man får den bilden;)
Jo jag drog en liknande, men det är därför jag har "remember" innan... PöjS
I'm Superman! King fucking Kong! I can pick you up and throw you a million miles. I'm number one. Number fucking one. I'm number one. Number fucking one. Number one! Number one! Number one!

2005-01-21 20:27
Uppin this muvvfakkah
I'm Superman! King fucking Kong! I can pick you up and throw you a million miles. I'm number one. Number fucking one. I'm number one. Number fucking one. Number one! Number one! Number one!

2005-02-06 18:32
shuriken - jag har alltid varit neger, neger!
damn, what's wrong with my generation?
we was the cream of the crop but it seems we've been robbed
that's what happens when you trade in all your dreams for a job

2005-02-06 21:34
glock är en gat fattar du glock=märke gat=pistol så ''some fo-fo's, some gat's n glocks''' passar inte in skulle varit mosberg's n glock's eller nåt sånt shit fan vet jag.... men mycket skön text.. peace
I’m smoking all the time not to get high just to ease my mind

2005-02-06 21:41
okej..
men asså ni har ju missuppfattat.
jag skriver ju inte:
we're coming at ya, with some fo-fo's AND some gat's n glocks

utan jag skriver:
we're coming at ya, with some fo-fo's, some gat's n glocks



som om jag skulle skriva:

nu hälsar jag på med lite chips, estrella o OLW
eller:
nu hälsar jag på med lite läsk, coca cola o fanta

damn, what's wrong with my generation?
we was the cream of the crop but it seems we've been robbed
that's what happens when you trade in all your dreams for a job

2005-02-06 23:16
ok peace. men riktigt softa rhymes
I’m smoking all the time not to get high just to ease my mind