Komik-Regrets..

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komik P38 2005-02-10 20:40	Komik-Regrets.. Regrets.. They said a picture lasts longer, but I wouldnt believe it- I started something endless and then I couldnt accheive it- But if I could turn the hourglass when its nuthin left to do- Then all my canvases would be filled with paintings of you.. I am out of time, the train has allready left the station- I got sunshine on a cloudy day, all I need is more patience- You need both rain and sunshine, to make a beautiful rainbow- More trains comin, but the next one might kill me on the railroad.. A story about Adam and Eve, missguided by the hands of time- A man with ambitions, king of the hill with to many rocks to climb- So many questions; Memorize my regrets or regret my memories? Stuck alone in the garden of Eden, with a bunch of stolen appletrees- You are beautiful, like an angel pulling the strings of an harp- We have reached the finish line, but we didn’t know where to start- I regret all the undone moments, and now I drown in my tears, lonely- If I could, I would gatter up an orchestra of angels for your ears only.. Regrets.. I'm Superman! King fucking Kong! I can pick you up and throw you a million miles. I'm number one. Number fucking one. I'm number one. Number fucking one. Number one! Number one! Number one!
Soy-Soy 2005-02-10 21:11	I started something endless and then I couldnt accheive it- -Niiice Det ser lite konstigt ut när du ibland rimmar på flera ord, och sen ibland så rimmar du bara på ett ord.. de blir lixom obalans. man förväntar sig att du ska rimma på flera ord hela tiden... Stuck alone in the garden of Eden, with a bunch of stolen appletrees- - lite konstig rad,.. Jag brukar inte kommentera engelska texter för att,.. Jag gillar inte engelska texter vanlightvis och detta var ingen undantag.. Men du fråga mig om ja kunde kommentera så. here ya goo.. Peace
Borttagen 2005-02-10 22:05	är inte särskilt bra på att ge kritik till såna här texter men dom här raderna gillade jag: They said a picture lasts longer, but I wouldnt believe it- I started something endless and then I couldnt accheive it- You need both rain and sunshine, to make a beautiful rainbow- bra rimm på railroad sen.. So many questions; Memorize my regrets or regret my memories? keep up da good work Denna användare har skrivit alla inlägg där användaren har tagits bort från whoa.
Khom-EY-ni 2005-02-11 09:45	I am out of time, the train has allready left the station- I got sunshine on a cloudy day, all I need is more patience- You need both rain and sunshine, to make a beautiful rainbow- More trains comin, but the next one might kill me on the railroad så jävla tuung!....nice jobbat, fått med myk info utan att krysta...o raderna kommer tebax till varand hela tiden under textens ggn...smart!,,,o brA! även riktigt tung slutrad!.... hela texten som helhet va tung...jag gillade den som fan... förtsätt!! :) Drick Mjölk! Muuuuuuuu!!!
komik P38 2005-02-11 11:18	Tack Soy och OT ! Khom, du är den enda som har förstått textuppläggningen hittils tack tack! upp! I'm Superman! King fucking Kong! I can pick you up and throw you a million miles. I'm number one. Number fucking one. I'm number one. Number fucking one. Number one! Number one! Number one!
Hwarang P40 2005-02-11 15:41	They said a picture lasts longer, but I wouldnt believe it- I started something endless and then I couldnt accheive it- -Väldigt Immortal Technique - Leaving the past.mp3 A man with ambitions, king of the hill with to many rocks to climb- -Nice, upp till himmelen med dig! If I could, I would gatter up an orchestra of angels for your ears only.. -Denna rad borde du omforumelera. Den är inte fel, men inte alls så effektfull slutklämmen skulle kunna vara. Peace mawn. Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101
Queff P38 2005-02-13 20:27	They said a picture lasts longer, but I wouldnt believe it- I started something endless and then I couldnt accheive it- You need both rain and sunshine, to make a beautiful rainbow- More trains comin, but the next one might kill me on the railroad.. - Tunga, gillar dom som fan! Målande och djupa. Bra att ha en så mäktig rad som öppningsrad dessutom! A man with ambitions, king of the hill with to many rocks to climb- So many questions; Memorize my regrets or regret my memories? - snyggt skrivet You are beautiful, like an angel pulling the strings of an harp- - Vacker rad! I regret all the undone moments, and now I drown in my tears, lonely- If I could, I would gatter up an orchestra of angels for your ears only.. - riktigt tungt avslut! den här diggar jag, även fast den känns ihopklistrad.. som att du hade några tunga rader som inte riktigt höll ihop, så skrev du bara några utfyllningsrader emellan dom. men det var najs ändå! damn, what's wrong with my generation? we was the cream of the crop but it seems we've been robbed that's what happens when you trade in all your dreams for a job
Borttagen 2005-02-13 20:45	komik- helt ärligt. jag älskar dig! Denna användare har skrivit alla inlägg där användaren har tagits bort från whoa.
Borttagen 2005-02-13 20:45	=) Denna användare har skrivit alla inlägg där användaren har tagits bort från whoa.

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