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highdropdown, - i hate loving you

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2009-12-16 17:24

highdropdown, - i hate loving you

Highdropdown, - i hate loving you

provade på att skriva en text med ett ämne som jag aldrig har skrivit
förut, och här är resultatet :)
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Highdropdown, - i hate loving you

No one can ever stop me from loving you,
they can force me to say i dont but its not true,
no one could ever stop the sky from being blue,
fuck this shit, all i wanted to say is "I love you.."

i always want what i can't have,
and when i know what i want,
then i want it so bad,
you are what i never had,
and what i will never have,
and its makes me crazy ,
i dont know what to do
when all i can think of is you,

my love for you is not far from killing me
im feeling sick and its hard to breathe
my chest feels heavy and my heart like stone
you can hate or love me, but never leave me alone
im addicted to you, your the only drug id'love to use
and every time you look into my eyes its like takin a overdose
your trapping my focus like none of them other hoes does
maybe its fate, and its not meant to become true,
but now u know i hate loving you

you've crushed my world,
nothing makes sense,
can't describe it in words,
you havin' fun on my expence
but i'll always be here for you,
whatever you say or do,
building up blocks of evil words
but im always getting thru

sometimes you say u love me,
sometimes you say u dont,
it's like i have the key,
and the damn lock is still locked

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2009-12-16 19:33
Men du lyckades bra! Skitbra!
what are you gonna do when i run for you!?

2009-12-19 13:08
tackar ! :)

mera!
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2009-12-19 17:36
fett man! :)
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2009-12-21 15:30
tack fifään :P

meeewraa ?
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2009-12-30 16:09
c'mon peep's, hit them comment's damnit :P
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2009-12-30 17:17
This wasn´t very hot lyrically. But there´s some decent emotion in there.

And this is more like an unrequited love poem, more so than a verse.

So if that´s what you were goin for, it´s a so-so effort.

It could of been made so much more interesting, with a better vocab n´
more substance. But the words seemed sincere.

Keep at it. You might get there.







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2009-12-30 18:58
thanks, ill keep your words in mind.
and I didn't care much 'bout the rhymes,
it was more like a "written from the heart" type of verse (poem if u like).
i'll work on my vocab ´n my lyrics.
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2010-01-03 03:16
whats the purpose of this lyrics , is it gone be a song, and if so, what the hook?..

are u gone sing it?
can u sing?

and I agree with dude upstairs... the lyrical is not all that, but i feel the "from the heart" thing...

2010-01-07 23:29
Im not sure ima sing it, later maybe ;)
Neither am i sure that i can sing because i have never recorded any songs,
I often do freestyles, and i write texts like this one pretty often but im never satisfied enough to record it.. Anyways, y'all felt the purpose of this verse, the emotion. anyways :) ima keep at it, thx for checkin' in ;)
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2010-01-11 12:57
Komigen nu ? ;) Meeera :D
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