Daavd - Leaving me out in the cold (kritik tack)
im not a dragon but smoke is comming out of my mouth
i'm cold like your heart as i'm standing outside your house
every breath im taking is like a knife coming down in my loung
how could our relationship ever become this wrong
like a cruel joke that lastest way to long
so i ask you again, how could it ever become this wrong
-- like a near death experiens, serious
pictures flashing infront of my eyes, period
every little piece of paper that have words to you
is now burning to keep me warm
every little piece of paper that have words to you
is now burning, cuz every word i've written about you was wrong
but im still standing here, in love, stupied
i should've broke the arrows for cupied
but insted i'm standing here, in love, stupied
cuz i wanna belive in cupied
nu när man varit borta ett tag och börjat igen skulle man uppskatta kritik, gärna konstruktiv!
börjat spela in hela låten men blev speciellt nöjd med den här versen och vill veta om jag läser i blindo eller om de är något att ha
thx på förhand
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