nån bra som vill lägga andra versen på engelska

nån bra som vill lägga andra versen på engelska

har spelat in en vers på ett beat, orkar inte skriva en andra vers så hoppas någon duktig kan lägga andra versen. här är min del Länk till http://www.speedyshare.com/files/19830535/vers1.mp3

det är min 3e vers ja kör på engelska. här är texten:

Let's go back in time when i was in kindergarden
when i felt alive when i were a little smaller
we used to play and had nothin that really bothered
stole apples in the neighbourhood, that's always how we got them

back then we were smaller, no one could've reach us
king in primary school threw snowballs at the teachers
the leadas, who grew up to become targets
some of us all became something we never wanted

some got caughted, but i guess thats life, (what, that it's strange?)
no, you have to have an open you mind
see what it's like, catch the rope and climb
up the mountain high hope you don't fall down and die

with the power like a lion i'll run through the desert
i'll be so big that you can't measure
mum, with my back straight up i will make u proud
put me in the shit, my words will take u down