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Lyric av en fattig vilsen pojke.

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2004-11-02 23:50

Lyric av en fattig vilsen pojke.

Ran as fast as my legs could take me towards my fantasi target
did not want to fall victim to this societys death market
saw several carcasses on the path that i struggled through
Carcasses that did not have a clue where they headed to
felt a stiff limbs knuckles punching me in my already sore wallet
but for what use? was already all wet
wet of blod from the infants anticipated lifelines
and from drool of uncle Sam's corner of his mouth whilst he sips fine wines
when will people wake up and smell the real life's flower
Instead of ensuring ourselfs that we have the soulpower
that will lead us to our deathbeds with a grin in our final hour
Wait what is this, have i reached my goal?
I see a bright light and im feeling very cold
the pulsing ache is almost all gone in my head
fuck should have realized that im already dead

Gärna kritik på förbättring i form av att uttrycka känslor, ifall någon har ett bra knep liksom.

Thats so 97
Le Life Quiet
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2004-11-03 00:12
Gaaah missade lite:(
korrektion

Ran as fast as my legs could take me towards my fantasi target
did not want to fall victim to this societys death market
saw several carcasses on the path that i struggled through
Carcasses that did not have a clue where they headed to
felt a stiff limbs knuckles punching me in my already sore wallet
dead man tried to sell me an umbrella but for what use was already all wet
wet of blod from the infants anticipated lifelines
and from drool of uncle Sam's corner of his mouth whilst he sips fine wines
when will people wake up and smell the real life's flower
Instead of ensuring ourselfs that we have the soulpower
that will lead us to our deathbeds with a grin in our final hour
Wait what is this, have i reached my goal?
I see a bright light and im feeling very cold
the pulsing ache is almost all gone in my head
fuck should have realized that im already dead
Thats so 97<br> Le Life Quiet<br> ---Input Moustache Here---

2004-11-13 15:55
Lönt att uppa?
Thats so 97<br> Le Life Quiet<br> ---Input Moustache Here---

2004-11-13 18:30
nice fan .!
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2004-11-17 04:09
Tack kekke
Thats so 97<br> Le Life Quiet<br> ---Input Moustache Here---

2004-11-17 04:22
If I could have been there from the beginning... if I could be there right now.. if I could promise to be there when you need me.. gimme a shout


nämen seriöst.. det va bra.
"sminka över kanylmärkena och kom in i matchen för fan.."

2004-11-18 23:48
Tack och tack.
Thats so 97<br> Le Life Quiet<br> ---Input Moustache Here---

2004-11-18 23:58
beatmeat
hehe tack men det var inte riktigt såna känslor enbart jag mena.
Jag vill köra på metaforer, budskapet ska inte direkt vara självklart liksom.

men tack ändå, igen:)
Thats so 97<br> Le Life Quiet<br> ---Input Moustache Here---